Comments for Tropical Coral Reefs- a world under threat http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench looking at threats to the modern reef Sat, 11 Dec 2010 13:51:51 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 Comment on Anthropogenic Activities by Andrew Davies http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/anthropogenic-activities/#comment-14 Andrew Davies Sat, 11 Dec 2010 13:51:51 +0000 http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/#comment-14 Yep, great! A Yep, great!

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Comment on Anthropogenic Activities by Gemma http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/anthropogenic-activities/#comment-13 Gemma Sat, 11 Dec 2010 13:13:41 +0000 http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/#comment-13 Is this the kind of thing you meant? I have also done the one for climate change which has turned out quite different . Is this the kind of thing you meant? I have also done the one for climate change which has turned out quite different .

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Comment on Videos by Andrew Davies http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/videos/#comment-12 Andrew Davies Thu, 09 Dec 2010 10:00:28 +0000 http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/#comment-12 It is a little Icon that looks like a chain (links). A It is a little Icon that looks like a chain (links).

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Comment on Videos by Gemma http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/videos/#comment-11 Gemma Wed, 08 Dec 2010 16:52:10 +0000 http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/#comment-11 on the edit screen page go to the add video icon. click on the url tab at the top, copy and paste the link in the first box and add the text in the second on the edit screen page go to the add video icon. click on the url tab at the top, copy and paste the link in the first box and add the text in the second

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Comment on Videos by daisie http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/videos/#comment-10 daisie Wed, 08 Dec 2010 15:52:04 +0000 http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/#comment-10 Hey how do i get the video links like that with my own title rather than just a copied link? Thanks Hey
how do i get the video links like that with my own title rather than just a copied link?

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Comment on Sea Level Rise by Andrew Davies http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/climate-change/sea-level-rise/#comment-9 Andrew Davies Mon, 06 Dec 2010 13:43:08 +0000 http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/#comment-9 <i>not constant constant, during</i>: Delete one of the constants.. not constant constant, during: Delete one of the constants..

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Comment on Climate Change by Andrew Davies http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/climate-change/#comment-8 Andrew Davies Mon, 06 Dec 2010 13:42:20 +0000 http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/#comment-8 Again, need a teaser here Again, need a teaser here

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Comment on Eutrophication by Andrew Davies http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/anthropogenic-activities/eutrophication/#comment-7 Andrew Davies Mon, 06 Dec 2010 13:42:02 +0000 http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/#comment-7 <i>area</i>: should be areas <i> This dramatically increases the nutrient concentration of the water which previously would have had a very low concentration in which coral have adapted to live (Muscatine & Porter 1977).</i>: You can make this sentence clearer by a slight adjustment: <em> This increases the nutrient concentration of the water dramatically, which previously, would have had a very low concentration. Corals are adapted to nutrient poor waters (Muscatine & Porter 1977).</em> <i>elsewhere. Here, t</i>: Two spaces in this bit.. <i>Increased sewage results </i>: Edit slightly, Elevated sewage discharge results.. <i>Increased sewage results in a decrease of water quality, as was observed in Kaneohe Bay, Hawaii (Smith et al., 1981). Smith et al. (1981) studied Kaneohe Bay. Kaneohe Bay</i>: I got that the study was in Kaneohe Bay... Need to edit this slightly, so you just mention Smith et al. once and Kaneohe Bay once or twice. area: should be areas

This dramatically increases the nutrient concentration of the water which previously would have had a very low concentration in which coral have adapted to live (Muscatine & Porter 1977).: You can make this sentence clearer by a slight adjustment:
This increases the nutrient concentration of the water dramatically, which previously, would have had a very low concentration. Corals are adapted to nutrient poor waters (Muscatine & Porter 1977).

elsewhere. Here, t: Two spaces in this bit..

Increased sewage results : Edit slightly, Elevated sewage discharge results..

Increased sewage results in a decrease of water quality, as was observed in Kaneohe Bay, Hawaii (Smith et al., 1981). Smith et al. (1981) studied Kaneohe Bay. Kaneohe Bay: I got that the study was in Kaneohe Bay… Need to edit this slightly, so you just mention Smith et al. once and Kaneohe Bay once or twice.

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Comment on Anthropogenic Activities by Andrew Davies http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/anthropogenic-activities/#comment-6 Andrew Davies Mon, 06 Dec 2010 13:37:48 +0000 http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/#comment-6 Put some teaser information here before you head into specifics. Also, tell the reader on this page what the child pages will contain/discuss. A Put some teaser information here before you head into specifics. Also, tell the reader on this page what the child pages will contain/discuss.

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Comment on Introduction by Andrew Davies http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/#comment-5 Andrew Davies Mon, 06 Dec 2010 13:37:12 +0000 http://extrememarine.org.uk/marianatrench/#comment-5 Mistake spotted: <i>world. they </i> <i>and the estimates </i>: Personal preference, but delete "the". Develop the aim of the blog more, lead us in.. I.e. I will be discussing x, y and z. Mistake spotted:
world. they

and the estimates : Personal preference, but delete “the”.

Develop the aim of the blog more, lead us in.. I.e. I will be discussing x, y and z.

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